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　　考研将近，很多同学开始注重写作的训练。

　　但有些同学凭自己背的模板在之前的考试中屡试不爽，就想当然的认为：考研嘛，背背模板，套用几篇文章，就可以拿一个比较不错的分数了。

　　如果你们真的这么想，伟哥就要生气了。

　　由于网络模板的盛行，我们自己都熟知的模板，阅卷老师怎么可能不知道呢？

　　在对模板审美疲劳后，阅卷老师的评分为着重放在非模板的部分。而且，一位老师的阅改一篇考研作文，时间最短仅需15秒！

　　试想一下，如果阅卷老师1分钟内连看几个类似的模板，那这几份试卷的作文分数肯定不会高，甚至可能被认为是雷同卷。

　　当然，伟哥说了这么多，并不是要同学们彻底否定模板的重要性，但是应该如何正确的利用和看待模板呢？

　　干货和模板并重

　　当同学们运用模板时一定要注意，必须要有自己写的实实在在的干货。

　　你们写了30字的模板，就必须有对应的30字的套路，写了100字的模板，就必须有100字的干货。

　　当你通篇都是模板，只替换了少数几个关键词，那这就是一篇失败的作文了。伟哥可以毫不夸张地说，及格都算老师给面子了。

　　那么今天，伟哥以“漫画作文”为例，教你怎么“套模板”。

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　　伟哥独家十二句作文法

　　当同学们着手写一篇文章的时候，请一定在心里默念三遍上面的模板。

　　英语二的同学不要觉得这里自己就可以跳过了，其实英语一和英语二的差距就在第一段，英语一是描述图画内容，英语二是描述图表的数据内容。

　　两者在本质上是一致的，英语二只不过是把漫画的内容换成了图表形式。

　　不断强调主题词

　　无论如何使用模板，一定不要忘记点题。

　　很多同学文章写着写着，自己都不知道写了啥了，这可是考研作文的大忌。

　　请记住，写作一定要紧扣主题。

　　阅卷老师批改作文的规范时间，只要不低于15秒就行。一般来说，批卷一篇作文普遍在15秒~20秒之间。

　　请你们一定要让老师不断看到你们的主题词，不断给他们视觉冲击，这样，才能保证自己的文章至少不会被判偏题。

　　昨天一个半小时的写作套路课程，伟哥硬生生的讲了2个小时，好的干货讲也讲不完。

　　当然，各位同学一定要学会举一反三。

　　昨天，伟哥给写作套路班的同学留了一份作业，同时，这篇作文也是伟哥19考研重点预测的一个主题——慈善、爱心。

　　伟哥在写这篇范文的时候，着重点放在了正反话题的对比。

　　Virtuously and warm-heartedly, those two most notable tycoons named Bill Gates and Buffett are holding their dinner in the name of charity. As we all known, they are running the optimum funds in this planet which do a lot favors to the world’s have-nots and now even try to persuade the richest at any corner of this world to participate in this assembly in the name of love. Actually, the question of what the reasonable criterion of success seems like is a real one. Some people may consider the quantity of one’s property as the terminal standard of one’s glory, yet, conversely, still the rest may take into account their dedication to society. Personally, I assure that the latter holds water / is in the point.

　　There seem to be two elements involved in moderate explanation to this perspective. To begin with, dedication may bring indispensable assistance to those who still live under the bottom line of modern living condition. Meanwhile, a great satisfaction would step subtly into mercy-producer’s conscience as well. Even blind to his bankrupting, Michael Jackson, the king of pop, had donated all of his belongings to bring as much smile of kids as possible to our human, for example. Also, externally, our society is still witnessing a large gap between haves and have-nots so that those who take relatively-more resources deserve practicing more beneficial performance so as to keep our society in a good order.

　　To sum up all analyses mentioned above, we may safely arrive at a conclusion that it is, unquestionably, beneficial to be generous and selfless in our work and daily life. So, a list involving some conductive and liberal mottos to guarantee habits for devotion should be attached to our dressing table as soon as possible.

　　各位同学，仔细看这篇范文，模板的地方肯定是有的。

　　但很明显，伟哥自己写的干货部分与模板是差不多的，甚至比写模板更花心思。

　　只有这样的文章，才是考场上真正耀眼的文章。

　　当然，这篇文章，各位同学请至少背3遍，熟记于心。

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